Crazy Quarter

Introduction to Ramses II

For this piece I chose a *Blackboard assignment we had in the middle of the quarter. The assignment was we had to combine sentences. Not only combining them, but to do this effectively, clearly, and it has constancy. We had to show that we knew how to use the skills we had learned effectively. As I look at it now, I realize how important it is to have **"parallelism." For example: "He had built temples, monuments in every major city of his kingdom, and he expanded famous temples at Karnack and at Luxor." We needed to walk the walk.

*Blackboard is a site where a student can access class announcements, weekly schedule, and other class stuff.

**The words and the sentence as a whole flows smoothly. There is a similarity through-out sentences in format.

posted by *I Rawk the Mic* @ 6/06/2007 09:33:00 pm